Unfortunate opening paragraphs

People in this economically pressed town near Lake Michigan are divided into two camps: Those who think Evan Emory should pay hard for what he did, and those who think he should be let off easy.

Michigan Town Is Divided Over Charges of Child Pornography from the Times.

People in this economically pressed town near Lake Michigan are divided into two camps: Those who think it’s inappropriate to begin a news article with a false dichotomy, and those who are irritated by the capitalization of the word that follows a colon.

(On content: the idea that this is even a close question is ridiculous, and the prosecutor is engaging in an absurd level of over-reach.)

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